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Montcollector's 250th Post Short( Or Long) Story Contest

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 Posted 05/06/2016  12:53 am  Show Profile   Bookmark this reply Add MontCollector to your friends list
I am sending 1st and second place prizes tomorrow. Please let me know when you receive.

@GoldenChest....we await your shipping info. Will mail out early next week.


Thanks to all that entered....Mont and Mrs.Mont.
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 Posted 05/06/2016  12:59 am  Show Profile   Bookmark this reply Add tweak800 to your friends list
Tis a shame I thought mine was really creative. Can't wait to read Mayflowers. Congrats everyone thanks for the contest Mont. and congrats on the milestone
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 Posted 05/06/2016  09:53 am  Show Profile   Bookmark this reply Add Mayflower2020 to your friends list
I think it may have been GoldenChest that accidentally sent his address to me by mistake. I replied to the message but don't know if it went to spam or not. It didn't have a user name on it, just real name and address.
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 Posted 05/07/2016  12:26 am  Show Profile   Bookmark this reply Add Mayflower2020 to your friends list
Mabel had just turned six in December of 1905 when her family moved from the coast of New Jersey to South Paulina Street in Chicago. Her father had taken a job earlier that summer and had sent for the family just before Christmas. She and her two older brothers moved into the second floor of a three level home with a small balcony that looked west. "Right over there", her father told her pointing from the balcony towards a large wooden structure. "That's West Side Park. It's the home of the famous Chicago Cubs."

The bears that Mabel thought her father had described gave her nightmares all winter until spring came along, the park sprung to life and her nightmares went away. She fell in love with baseball like most young girls fall for flowers or adventure books. That season the team set the record for most wins in a season and won the National League Pennant. When her father had a little extra money he would take her to the park where they would sit in the cheap seats for a nickel a piece. When he couldn't take her she would sit on the balcony and stare at the park during home games, waiting for the crowd to erupt in cheers to inform her that they had just scored a run, or made a great play. After the game she would shout to the men leaving the park asking for details from the game. What was the score? Who pitched? How many stolen bases were there?

Despite losing the World Series that year to what she always called "the Lesser Chicago Team" her father came home from work on her 7th birthday with a shiny, brand new 1906 nickel and presented it to his only daughter. "This was the year the Cubs won the Pennant," he told her. "Use this for good luck and maybe they will win it again, maybe they will even win the World Series." She gripped the nickel tight in her hand and hugged her father. It was the most money she had ever had, and she was determined never to spend it.

The next season she took her good luck coin everywhere she went. She took it to the stadium where the Cubs proved themselves unstoppable in 1907 and come October they swept Detroit 4 games to 0 to win their first World Series. All because, Mabel thought, of her lucky nickel.

That December on her 8th birthday her father again gave her a new nickel. 1907. The year her team won the World Series. Again she carried it for a season, and again it helped them win. By the end of the year after winning three pennants in a row, they found themselves back in the World Series. This time becoming the first team to win Back to Back World Series.

If she wasn't convinced before, she sure was now, it was the nickels that brought all the luck to the team and on the cold December morning of her 9th Birthday she ran downstairs the second she woke up expecting a 1908 Nickel to replace her former charm. Her father, sitting with his morning tea and paper pretended that he forgot, but she knew better. He loved how happy this simple token had made her when he pulled it out from under his teacup. But he had no idea that this was the last World Series coin that he, or anybody else would ever give her.

Season after season came and went without the hope of winning another championship. In 1910 they made the World Series but were crushed by the Athletics with the 1908 nickel in her pocket. Every time there was a stressful moment in a close game she would pull it out and hold it between her fingers and rub it back and forth feeling the V on the back which she said stood for 'Victory' and not the Roman Numeral 5. But it didn't seem to work on this nickel as it had with the two she had before. In 1916 the team moved from her modest neighborhood park 6 miles north to a massive stadium they would play in for at least the next hundred years. So at 16 she bought a used bicycle for 10 nickels. When she first saw Wrigley Field she thought she was in heaven. A sign read"Only 5 cents for a Hotdog and Coke!" "Not a chance." she thought inspecting hers.

In 1918 they lost the World Series again to Babe Ruth and the Boston Red Sox. And then lost again and again and again in 29, 32, 35, 38, and 45. All the while, Mabel got older and older, and Mabel's nickel got more and more worn down. "If this nickel is full of luck, then it's full of bad luck." she told her teenage children in 1932 after Babe Ruth, now with the Yankees had called his shot, pointing to center field before hitting a homer there against her Cubs in her stadium, while she rubbed her not so lucky 1908 nickel.

In 1945 after the 7th World Series loss her nickel had seen she decided that maybe she was lucky anyways when her two sons returned home from WWII and her first of ten grandchild was born on her 46th birthday.

The World got more expensive and nickels lost their value. She watched them change their design to the Buffalo nickel in 1913, and again to a portrait of Jefferson in 1938. All the while her 1908 nickel stayed by her side and she would rub it for good luck.

In 1976 Mabel became a great grandmother. "Four generations she though, I am so lucky, and yet I am the only one of us who has seen the team win it all."

In 1981 when the Wrigley Family finally sold the team for 20.5 Million Dollars she kept everyone in her family well informed that her team sold for a whopping 90 Million Nickels.

My first memory of Mabel was when I was 6 years old seeing her throw the nickel at her TV screaming "I shoulda spent you on a hamburger!" And then she went and picked it up and put it back in her pocket where it belonged.

Everyone she knew called her in 1989 when the Universal Studios film 'Back to the Future II' predicted the Cubs would win it all in 2015 Sweeping Miami. "I'll be 115 and living in my third century" she said, "but I know for a fact they will break my heart. ."

In 1990 Mabel passed away at 90 years old and before she died she spent every penny she had except for that old worn out nickel, featureless from years of rubbing it for good luck, which she left to her youngest great-grandchild at the time. I was 8 years old, the same age that she was when it was given to her. It has brought me good luck through my life, helping me through high school, and college, first jobs, and marriage. But it hasn't helped the Cubs win another World Series, or even get back to one in over 60 years. I pulled it out in 03 when I was in college and the Cubs were in the playoffs. Then in 07 I took it with me when I moved to Los Angeles where I rubbed it watching them lose in the playoffs in 07 and again in the left field bleachers as I watched the Dodgers sweep Mabel's Cubs at home in Los Angeles.

When the Cubs made the playoffs in 2015 we all thought the movie would be right, and that if she wasn't 115 in heaven, that she was somewhere else making a deal with the Devil to make Back to the Future come true. But alas, it didn't and the luck of the nickel lives on.

Mabel lived to be 90, and left behind 6 children, 10 grandchildren and 22 great grandchildren. She was the luckiest woman I ever knew. Maybe, looking back that coin was never supposed to bring luck to 9 men on baseball field. Maybe the 108 year old coin was always supposed to be Mabel's lucky nickel and not the Chicago Cubs.



Montcollector's-250th-Post-Short-Or-Long-Story-Contest
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05/07/2016 12:40 am
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 Posted 05/07/2016  12:58 am  Show Profile   Bookmark this reply Add GoldenChest to your friends list

Yep sure did send it to the wrong guy. Sorry about that!, it was a long day.

Excellent story Mayflower!!
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 Posted 05/07/2016  01:23 am  Show Profile   Bookmark this reply Add MontCollector to your friends list
Thanks Mayflower. Not sure why it wouldn't let me copy and paste it. It looked good in preview....but came out as garble when I hit post.
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 Posted 05/07/2016  01:25 am  Show Profile   Bookmark this reply Add tweak800 to your friends list
I thought this was supposed to be through the coins eyes? Did I read the rules wrong.
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 Posted 05/07/2016  01:47 am  Show Profile   Bookmark this reply Add MontCollector to your friends list

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I thought this was supposed to be through the coins eyes? Did I read the rules wrong.


No you didn't, however with only 4 entries we had to be lenient on the rules. If we stuck by rules completely we would've had to eliminate half the entries right off. Your story was a little short(1.5 pages min 3 pages max)but was still considered.

After I was informed about this(I didn't read stories until judging was done) I told my wife to consider all entries as were, as long as they were about their coin they posted. Had there been more interest this would have changed.
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 Posted 05/07/2016  03:35 am  Show Profile   Bookmark this reply Add tweak800 to your friends list
In standard Times new roman and font size twelve which I think is small It is still 2 pages
I'm going to share it anyways. I sent it to you from note pad in word wrap then just copied and pasted into website email. I figured you would be able to discern the difference. Thanks though another contest where we Don't follow the rules.

Well I had woken up all shiny and red.
Ready for the day I got out of my bed.

Rolled out of my sleeve and into the day.
Just to be battered and beaten away.

1863ish it's hard to remember.
Don't know the month maybe September.

I was stuffed in a pocket all dark, little air.
With bits of straw and even some hair.

From here I overheard a man say with exclamation.
Have you heard the news of the Emancipation Proclamation?

I was born yesterday so I knew of nothing.
Come to find out this was a huge happening.

They say there where slaves, people of color.
I knew nothing of the sorts from my Indianhead brothers.

We were all Red well some of us Brown.
But we all came from the same place, the mint in that town.

So around I went in search of knowledge.
Not like they had an Indianhead Cent college.

So I traveled in pockets and sometimes in bags.
Listening to stories and how everyone brags.

The exact details are fuzzy so I'll keep this short.
How I ended up like this let me report.

I was changing hands and went for a ride.
I don't know what happened it felt like a slid.

Down I went into a machine.
Only to be pinched and stuck in between.

These two giant wheels with teeth oh so big.
I have never seen something like this rig.

Whatever it was it wouldn't let go.
It was beat on and shaken but who was to know.

I was inside getting tattered, well torn.
No this was not right this was not the norm.

Grinding and hissing it came to a stop.
Right at that moment I took a big hop.

I was spat out like a piece of trash.
No longer real pretty since I had been in my crash.

So I lay there in the open now, for quite some time.
Waiting for something just some sort of sign.

Then it came, a little boy picked me up.
He thought I was pretty so he kept me for luck.

I stayed with him for a very long while.
Then I became one of his pretties and kept in a pile.

Then one day I finally got to rest.
I was put back in a roll like one of the best.

That's where stayed for quite a few years.
Amongst my brother, my family, my peers.

Eureka It came a new day from my rest.
I jumped out of my bed and joined the rest.

The man who I saw he seemed o.k.
I have been taken care of ever since that day.

He treated me well like some kind of Nectar.
Come to find out he was a collector

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 Posted 05/10/2016  12:43 am  Show Profile   Bookmark this reply Add Mayflower2020 to your friends list
Coins were received today. Thank you so much. A few firsts for me. My first Barber dime and Quarter, and my first Standing Liberty quarter. I have a good range of half dollars but I am mostly a quarter guy but am just starting to expand back to these series. Thanks again!
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 Posted 05/13/2016  8:29 pm  Show Profile   Bookmark this reply Add GoldenChest to your friends list
Still waiting on mine. No biggie tho
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 Posted 05/13/2016  9:49 pm  Show Profile   Bookmark this reply Add MontCollector to your friends list

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Still waiting on mine. No biggie tho


Emailed you. let me know if you get it please.. Not sure you are receiving them from me.
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 Posted 05/14/2016  7:01 pm  Show Profile   Bookmark this reply Add GoldenChest to your friends list
I received it and relied to email, thanks again!
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 Posted 05/17/2016  8:06 pm  Show Profile   Bookmark this reply Add Earle42 to your friends list
Got back into town - prize was here waiting for me. Thanks again for this great contest.

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 Posted 05/17/2016  8:11 pm  Show Profile   Bookmark this reply Add MontCollector to your friends list
Thanks all. Contest over. Please move if necessary
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