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noahs-numismatics Pillar of the Community Canada 3167 Posts	Posted 11/28/2012 09:40 am Hi! Here is the link to my new website. Any comments or feedback would be appreciated. Thanks! http://noahs-numismatics.websitesofcanada.com/ Report this Post to the Staff

John1 Moderator United States 56855 Posts	Posted 11/28/2012 10:53 am I like this line "Mission statement my goal is to provide you with quality coins to your satisfaction" I don't care for this line "in order to help you successfully grown your collection to budget In testimonials the print should be bigger as well as under featured IMHO of coarse, John1 Report this Post to the Staff
blackjack Valued Member United States 386 Posts	Posted 11/28/2012 11:02 am Lots of luck. Yes, I'd reword the mission statement, to make it clearer, less wordy. Report this Post to the Staff
Moe145 Pillar of the Community United States 8904 Posts	Posted 11/28/2012 12:52 pm Quote: Yes, I'd reword the mission statement, to make it clearer, less wordy. and spell and grammar check it. Suggestions: Mission statement= Statisfaction -> satisfaction and grown -> grow. Subscription Page = receive -> receive. The second sentence ("The email that sends the request...") does not require a comma. Manage Subscriptions Page= Awkward wording after "wishes" in the first line. Recommend deleting the next line. Other that these minor items, it's very apparent you spent some time building this site. I wish you all the luck in the world with your ebay store!! Edited by Moe145 11/28/2012 1:02 pm Report this Post to the Staff
baysinger626 Pillar of the Community United States 950 Posts	Posted 11/28/2012 2:21 pm I would also change it to say "Enter to win a silver plated Christmas medallion." It almost sounds like you get a free medallion every time you make a $5 purchase. It sounds like a nit-pickey thing, but I'm sure you know how ebay buyers can be. Report this Post to the Staff
noahs-numismatics Pillar of the Community Canada 3167 Posts	Posted 11/28/2012 7:38 pm Great! Thanks for your feedback! All of your suggestions have been applied to the site. If there is anything else, please let me know. Thanks! Report this Post to the Staff
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