As far as the noticeable line break goes, I have two
Native American dollars at quick reach, and they both have it. It looks as though the edge collar is two pieces, but then again, that makes sense as the edges of proofs are applied after striking of the coins as to give them only (in theory) one position, in contrast to normal coins that have two positions (where edge lettering is right side up or upside down when you lay the coin face up).
Where thickness is concerned, mine appear to be thicker than normal as well, but they are in 2x2's, so it's rather hard to get a "good" look.
And, where star placement is concerned, since the collars appear to different configuration than the ones used for normal production, it's all entirely possible that the stars are spaced differently on them.
Note: I'd strongly recommend wearing white cotton gloves when handling (especially) proofs.